Message In Between Titles- -Number 5 Poem by Susan Williams

Message In Between Titles- -Number 5

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.......Hope Is The Thing With Feathers
........And when hope died it told me
....Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night.
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~~~~~~2020 susan williams
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Tuesday, December 22, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: death,fight,hope
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Author's Note.When my computer died, I was without means to get on PoemHunters. I was bored so I decided to invent a new poem structure. You take a famous poem's title and make it the opening to your own poem. Then you write a line of your own and try to connect it to Famous Title 1on the first line and Famous Title 2 on the third line that concludes your poem. Now I know there's a Grinch out there that will call this Plagiarism but since I mentioned the famous titles, phooey on Mr. Wet Blanket. I had to do something or go crazy...... or crazier.Love being back, you all.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 23 December 2020

Hope, yes, sometimes I define it as a true collaborator of confidence or belief/dependence on self; for every strong hope humankind lives and plans a good future; beautiful your wise expression

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Susan Williams 24 December 2020

Mahtab, when a person has been housebound long enough, the nonsense they will get up to is amazing--actually I rather enjoyed my new poetry form--was much more fun than crosswords! ! Thank you for your comment!

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Bharati Nayak 23 December 2020

Susan, you give a good idea ---Here we remember the famous quotes with due recognition to the original authors and in between we scatter ourselves a little bit and make it whole.

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Susan Williams 24 December 2020

Bharati! ! ! ! You do an excellent explanation of this newborn style---'in between we scatter ourselves a little bit and make it whole.' Very poetic comment, my dear friend! The mark of a true poet! ! !

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Savita Tyagi 23 December 2020

On yesterday's PoemHunter page a poet had connected two paragraphs of Robert Frost's two famous poems. I have connected couple of ancient and modern poems. Connecting two lines seems perfect to me. Whatever appeals to our heart is perfect and beautiful. two lines

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 11 October 2022

Very ingenius Susan very smart

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Anjandev Roy 11 October 2022

Profound piece.......enjoyed it.......thank u, dear poetess....

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Muhammad Ali 21 January 2021

Hi Susan. In between titles, hope died. Dying, said something. A nice and very sad poetic image.

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Muhammad Ali 21 January 2021

Hi Susan,

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 January 2021

A poem of great depth. A poem presented uniquely by a one of a kind mind. It takes a great mind to create a new poem structure.Cleverly written.To my Poem List.

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