i have a poem
her every line
starts and ends
with words that are divine
her black hair and
her white skin
are more beautiful
than fatal sin
she is as bright
as sunshine
she is great
she is sublime
whenever she goes
into an inn
everybody admires
her sparkling pin
she`s always rising
and has no decline
that is a poem
i can proudly call mine
many people asked me why u used the word pin, well i mean by it the piece of jewelry that has diamonds at its both ends.
wow bluey, nice poem ooooooops the diamonds in that pin hurt me toooooooo .....10 regards anjali
Aha! At last something open and not heartbreaking! Keep it up!
really a poem you should be proud of..very sweet....paint a vivid picture of her beauty...your piece is sparkling like pin that everybody have seen...
this is a great poem, i love how you connected it all so well, its amazing!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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