The rain has a lot to say
And it speaks its heart out
Leaving nothing to fantasy
Divulging all uncensored
No manipulation, no manoeuvres
Just an outburst of sad storage
Un-simmered serving to the listener
Uncontemplated confession
In the midst of bricks and walls
Of our so-called connection.
Short and impressive. Truly Nosheenic. Five stars and MyFavouritePoems.
3) A heartful appreciation from the Land on Monsoons.
An end to exile in the thin atmosphere! Such an orgiastic release, such anticipation of mud pies to be made!
The first four lines speak the whole thing that the poetess wants to express through this excellent poem. Excellent
An outburst of sad storage. Good use of rain metaphor. May spring come fast in your Connection
A beautiful poem full of metaphors and captivating images. Wonderful poetic expressions! Top Marks
This poem came across at the right time of the season. So beautifully written
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Truly, showers provide respite from warmth and happiness to each and every one of us just like your poems. Full *****