Moon In The Window Poem by Sameer Ahmed
Moon In The Window
Stars faded
And hegemony celebrated
By white light
On darkened land
As a milky globule
With greyish spots
Imprinted its clone
On window glass.
Hypnotic scene
Cooled the ambience
And beamed diversely
To light up
My inner vibe
Tides of calmness rose
As I heeded.
(6/24/2009)
The peace, the calm of night, entranced by moonbeams.....lovely poem. 10++
I particularly like these two lines: Imprinted its clone On window glass. Good use of modern going ons.
Your poem creates a certain dreamy and elusive atmosphere that is associated for me with art works by impressionists. It has a quality to seduce a reader with colour and escape at the same time somewhere into darkness(or whiteness depending on a state of mind of a reader) .If to recite it, it also brings an interesting sonic experience reminding of 'sound waves' in 'Claire de Lune' by Claude Debussy. Thanks for sharing, Sameer :) A.
Glorious poem Sameer. Beautiful imagery and I too feet the peace that other poets talk of too! 10 Karin Anderson
'white light on darkened land' indeed the moon is a vision of comfort on a lonely dark night... and thanks to the heavens we are never really left in total darkness....
beautiful through out..but beauty initself looses its charm so the last line delivers the impact....and it becomes majestic...
You have eulogised the peace and stillness of the night in this lovely poem...10
You capture the stillness and peace of the night and form into art..10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 12:07:02 AM # 1.0.0
this is a kind of poem that gives the needed tranquility to the reader friend.. very soothing poem.. a great refreshment..thanks10+= with love shan