More Than A Hundred Poem by Vidi Writes

More Than A Hundred

Rating: 5.0


I returned from that poetry Meet
People asked me eagerly …
‘How many were present? ’
I told them... 'a hundred'.
They replied… ‘that's all? ! ’
Inner, I murmured…
If you could also take apart in it
Wouldn’t it be more than a hundred! !

-vidi-
07/07/2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shashendra Amalshan 07 July 2009

well this is sort of amusing read ma'am.. i honestly don't know what else to say! ! ! .... nice with love shan

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Saadat Tahir 07 July 2009

yes vidi ji sitting home and expecting events to to be smashing successes....thats what cable has done to our enthussiam and sense of participation very timely poignant reminder cheers

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Rakesh Bedi 07 July 2009

Thanks Vidi; you made me smile!

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rago rago 07 July 2009

enjoyed fully let some batsman score more....... finely linked.........

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Sandra Fowler 10 July 2009

You express your viewpoint with spirit. 10, for you. Kind regards, Sandra

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Indira Renganathan 09 July 2009

You must 've told it on their face....or atleast make them read this piece of yours..thought provoking fun at the end of the poem...well said

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Catrina Heart 09 July 2009

A fine poetic pictorial of reality...That always happen in any occassion....Thanks!

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Kesav Easwaran 08 July 2009

nice work...imagination is the magic tool poets use to search out an idea and to dwell on...like the theme found out in this write...thanks...10

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Mamta Agarwal 07 July 2009

not everyone has the enthusiasm or the will.its not about numbers Mamta

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