Every life is a pocket watch
owned by a man in Sixth-Street.
Every dream was once a star
burning up your dirty laundry.
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MULTIDIMENSIONAL LOVE NOTES is a truly excellent poem with tinge of surrealistic tone, but a brilliant verse, well conveyed and best presented. The picture added is true surrealistic and beautiful painting. I can tell you, since I am also a paintress. I like this poem very much. CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. Hooray! A 10 ++++++for the dashing poem.
Every you, you seem to be has a me waiting for you in Istanbul, Denver, Saturn, and the sea. I'll wait all my lives to fall in love..............//// beautiful expression about multidimensional love; congrats
Excellent poem with a marked sense of the surreal...congratulations!
Almighty's love to us and our love to Almighty, He knows everything.....So Hr Pat's out... ... Congratulations poet.....Nice poem.
.Every dream was once a star burning up your dirty laundry. Every secret we kept to ourselves was spat out by God. wonderful imagination....... fine poem my dear poet. t ony
Yes love can be viewed in Multidimensional ways. Here love is not limited to a person but spread all over the universal....very impressive!
Nicely articulated poem with a touch of philosophy of life. Thanks.
Great or small, there is none sans longing for love sure! Congratulations dear Poet!
Congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'! The poem and the painting, are both beautiful! 'Every you, you seem to be has a me waiting for you' - to me, these two are the best lines of the poem.
Muse, Peace and Love to all mankind without racism! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Giving falling in love too much time; sometimes you just have to make a decision! Not poetic I know but truer to reality.
Love is an ocean of you and me and them....swimming together forever.
A great multidimensional quest for love. Well deserved selection as poem of the Day, Heartiest congrats.
o let me wait in whole lives with pure breath for the love one o let me dye with the colors of heart to be the endless love o let me put on the dress of love with immortal shadow of the soul..........
You'll go to the ends of the earth for your love, a wonderful poem.
Most deserviong poem! ToMyPoemList! This poem was chosen twice, last years same date. PLease keep on creating and submitting, dear poet! I cite your remarkable lines/words Every you, you seem to be has a me waiting for you in Istanbul, Denver, Saturn, and the sea.................So true! Thank you for sharing.