My Clift Poem by Rage'n Curtis

My Clift

Rating: 3.4


Im standing on a clift
thats higher than all the rest.
And Ill stay up here untill I fall
to meet my lonley death.

I'll stand on my clift and think
of the world and how its all fucked up.
If I was to die, not known by man,
It would be my pleasurable luck.

I'll stare and wait and prey to
God that the human race will change.
Or else the human race dies young like
a puppy dog with mange.

So what would happen if I was to
die upon my desolate clift?
Would enyone even notice,
do you think I'll be missed?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Arabian Heart 12 June 2008

everyone wants to be remembered trust you will be too after all its true to just be you

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Vanessa Svaleson 21 May 2008

i feel like that like all the time and i feel where this poem is coming from and it makes me sad i did cry on this i just related to it so well i been on many cliff wonding should i or not will anyone care even notice -Shorty

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Meghan R. 03 September 2007

What that Kylie girl said below me! 'Id miss your poems'as well, I realy like them you are so gifted, so young. Its nice to be blessed with these talents. I can tell you something....'you would be missed not by the people whom you asumed to be missed by, But the ones you least notice care for you in your everday of life.' Might not make sence, but i think you will realize what im sayin eventually lol. Nice poem though, so much meaning. I can see the passion you have in wrighting. Just by reading your poems! Great job. Its Amazing once again. -Meghan =]

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... Lynch 16 August 2007

Well...I'd miss your poems...A good write. -Kylie M. Lynch

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Evaughn Gray 08 August 2007

of course you'd be missed you dork! ..good poem.~hazel

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Mallory Piña Villa 02 August 2010

that's deep, really. And you'll be missed, the world is not that cruel against someone who writes this good

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Jazz Annis 18 May 2009

i would definiatly miss you! ! !

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Rose Cook 02 May 2009

: (i would miss you

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Jenny Molloy 02 May 2009

dat is a deadly poem man! ! ! woo ur a rely gud writer! ! ! :) xxx

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Emo Seb 29 July 2008

dude, id totally notice if u died and i would die as well. plus, who cares if (some) humans die, just as long as the doggies r ok. lol, not kidding.

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Rage'n Curtis

Rage'n Curtis

Las Vegas, Nevada
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