Right across my dream they come
I know not from which land
Bright ‘n buoyant glow in flame
They take me to a dance!
Seat me on a splendid throne
All over blooms spread on
Put one matchless makeshift crown
On head; I haven’t known!
Treat me like a king of fame
I can’t cover my shame
Me a simple common man
So why this pomp ‘n shine?
Ask them; my friends who you are
One tells with pride ‘n smile
‘Sky my name, dame dusk ‘n dawn
These stars; we all your fans’!
19 05 08
May be stars n sky too your fans, incredible, it is the vision a poet can bring out, brilliant work, wonderful conept, perfect 10
Very artful and charming. Ten for you and ten for your fans. As always, Sandra
Admiration is a boost to the ego but you must not begin to believe it makes you special
A beautiful imaginative write. The wonders of nature can make a Poet's mind very creative. A poetic gem crafted.by a brilliant mind.
amazing poem...the suspense fans...the sky and stars are well kept till the last....written with your superb craftsmanship....10
Lucky me that I read this on a lazy Sunday evening... and feeling proud to think that I am one among those who comes to your dream for all your expressive writes.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a very nice poem and expresses the brightness and the joy awaiting with so much care and respect. well done.