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My Soul Sacrifice (For A Child) ***warning: Harsh Content***

Rating: 4.9

it was in those beautiful
cool eyes
the birth of my madness
and an innocence demise
you had no right to bring me
into your cruel little world
i was just a little girl
i was just a little girl

didn't anyone hear me f*cking

scream
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Broken Peaces 03 February 2008

A truely brave write from a truely brave heart, you have won my friend and blossomed to be the Rose in the cabbage patch of life Chris 10

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Chris Mendros 05 September 2007

dittoes to what faniesson said. Difficult subject, dealt with harshly and honestly, not just exploited for personal gain. Smoldering with the honesty of a soul betrayed.

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Jerry Hughes 25 May 2007

Lee, a too often told story, sorry you went through this humiliation at such an early age but you risen above it splendidly...

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fanniesson - 17 December 2006

Nice piece kept me glued to it, most times I can’t make it through subjects I would’ve even write about. Really nice work

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Keith Wells 07 December 2006

One thing I love about reading your poems Lee is that you write from the heart, a true talent that most people wish they could do. Some poeple can only amagine the horror of this world not many have the bravery to write about it. To many people think they know how people feel that have gone through issues of this sort, I don't pretend to but I have gone through issue such as this with a few very special people in my Life. God bless yo Lee and keep writing - your an amazing writer. Love - Keith

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Tailor Bell 06 December 2006

sharing pain in hope to help others is a commendable message and worth telling to all...your strong statements carry a determined energy. -Tailor

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Diane Violet 04 December 2006

Sad, humble, brave, honest...a voice for every child who goes unheard.....Diane

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Duncan Wyllie 02 December 2006

Dear LEE To say that this was touching would not give it credit enough, you have been so open and so honest, crossing boundaries, reaching the many, I hope that someone reads this and shows some compassion, and maybe it could also stop someone from acting in this selfish and hidious way Love duncan X

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Roger Bowman 02 December 2006

Another real sad story of life...I agree with Lee and Doc's comments. Take care Roger

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Untitiled and unnamed 26 November 2006

Sad beyond belief, Makes me so angry knowing that this does go on, What is wrong with these people.... God bless you, who can stand tall, and write about it.... I admire you for that... My best as always, lee...x

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