My Strength Poem by Sathya Narayana

My Strength

Rating: 4.7


MY STRENGTH

What is in life, so great?
Hard times arrive to hurt
with no notice prior.
Fortunes...ah so promiscuous,
flirt awhile and disappear!
Lo, this is life,
full of strain, struggle and strife!

But I built my own fort!
In my life, a good part
I gave to jest and laughter.

Let come pain or predicament
I can stave off and stay stiff
like an unbending alp.

Believe it or not...
humour is my armour,
my weapon and my forte;
bearing and braving my blues
and cruising my life boat
through many an unpleasant strait,
safely and smoothly
towards the other port!

Thursday, August 21, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: blues,humor,strength
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Chowdhury 24 August 2008

this is just excellent. nothing less than a 10. this is my kind of poem and the wordings are thought provoking. thaks for sharing this wonderful piece of art with all. take care

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Kris Smith 24 August 2008

Well composed and nice content well deserved 10 thanks Chris

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rajagopal h 23 August 2008

well written Sathya...your strength is mine also..in tamil..Valluvar said..Thunbam varum vaelayil siringa...means when there is misfortune laugh away..great

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Bharat B. Trivedi 23 August 2008

Sathya, Your poem underlines my father's favourite quote: 'Life is a pendulum, swaying between a smile and a tear'... I like the shades of subtle humour in your write... Keep it up!

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Ershad Mazumder 23 August 2008

You have only one life.Take care of it. Do not make fun of it. Enjoy life

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Raj Nandy 23 December 2008

Yes, the ability to see the ludicrous side of life and to laugh it off, coupled with a positive frame of mind, help in winning the battle of life! Even in matters of love, - one must not' love too well ' like Othelo, but love wisely so! 10! Seasons greetings and a Happy New Year - 2009! - Raj Nandy

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Thank you so much Sathya for that powerful paradign. Many times when life gets tough it is very easy to become serious and even sad. Thanks for the weapond of humor.10...

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 04 October 2008

SOMETIMES IN THIS LONG WAIT FOR SOMETHING WE ALL HAVE SOMETHING TO HOLD ONTO... HUMOR BEEN UR FORTE... :) NICEEE

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Jyoti Saxena 04 September 2008

what we think is eventually reflected back -this is the fundamental law of nature and i am sure if u have chosen to smile -smile u will! that is surely the way to beat the very life out from all problems that come across us.-kick them with yr positive attitude

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Andrew Blakemore 03 September 2008

A smile can wipe away a thousand tears. A lovely poem. Best wishes, Andrew

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Sathya Narayana

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Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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