I was crying
Feeling myself lonely
In a crowd.
But my loneliness vanished
The day I saw you
Sitting as a dew drop
On the tip of a grass
I knew
My tears have turned cloud
And have mingled with you
They come back to me
When I become dry and thirsty
In every winter
They wait for me
On a grass-tip.
This is such a lovely poem, dear Bharati. I liked the sensitive and delicate nature of the poem. By mingling the human tears with that of the dew drops on the grass, you have established a deep connection with nature. An elegant poem that deserves a full score......10 To my Poem List as well.
A sweet poem on winter dew. Flowing smooth it makes an interesting reading. Loved it. 'When I become dry and thirsty In every winter They wait for me On the tip of grass.'.. this is simply awesome. Thanks.
Thank you so much Anil Kumar Panda for your encouraging comment.I just made a small edit to this poem.
A wonderful and lovely poem that captures the connection between humanity and nature. A poem of great depth that only a few minds can conceive. Cleverly written.
amazingly written the tears drop of inner feeling by the course of time becomes the dew on the new born leaf in the new day morning
Hey, Bharati! The image sitting as a dew drop on the tip of a grass is pure poetry for me. If it were my poem I’d make adjustments for its sound, but such differences are what distinguish us one from another. -Glen
What a lively expressed poem- -fragile and tender and so very straught from the heart honest. 10++++++++= and onto my fav list! ! ! !
this poem is so much subtle that it is hard to say a word, to keep this touchy image unshaken. yes, after all, this universe is nothing but what we feel. very nice poem
Feeling is well combined with dew drops. A sensitive poem is nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
That is original and beautiful and everything I have come to expect from your poetic soul and talented imagination! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++++++++++ and onto my fav list