Kranthi Pothineni

My Valentine - Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

On this rosy day of Valentine
My lonely heart started to shine
With the inside beauty of mine
To have a romantic wine and dine

My heart sang its love is divine
Said, to me it can even combine
Both the earth and sky on one line
For a sign of smile in eyes of mine

It sang, that it can even define
The lovely beauty of cloud nine
And hidden beauty in depth of pine
By looking deep into eyes of mine

It made my eyes to show a sign
That I will love to have a wine
And will forever love to assign
My lovely heart as my Valentine

Comments about My Valentine by Kranthi Pothineni

  • (2/17/2010 2:19:00 AM)

    what a memory of hope...a flying heart of solitude amongst the wilderness
    of surrender and passion....complicated yet! a things to accept what is love
    and fantasy....Great...God blesses...a 10 +++
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  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (2/15/2010 11:59:00 PM)

    An introvert valentine, Kranthi, but nice one. (Report) Reply

  • (2/15/2010 2:55:00 AM)

    Its very soft and nice but yes it could be more romantic (Report) Reply

  • (2/14/2010 5:11:00 AM)

    I was hoping it would be more romantic
    good write
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  • (2/13/2010 6:24:00 PM)

    Comes across with a gentle feeling. (Report) Reply

  • Louis Rams (2/12/2010 9:50:00 PM)

    the last two lines said it all.
    gr8888t write before this valentines night.
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  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (2/12/2010 8:06:00 PM)

    it's hard to write a poem with a single rhyme pattern.... proves only that you're a great poet..... well done! (Report) Reply

  • Rajaram Ramachandran (2/12/2010 6:47:00 PM)

    You have set the poem to uniform rhyme, giving a place to your Valentine in your lovely heart at the end. Good. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 12, 2010

Poem Edited: Sunday, February 14, 2010

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