I stand there, alone
with the roses in my hand
Like a child i smiled and cried
How difficult to say goodbye
I rather say Hi without any reply
Than accept your bye
I stand there by your side
On your quiet land
The roof of your hidden room
In marked ground by your name
I stand there, alone
tried to remember your face
Because i cant wake you from sleep
Talking how miss time we had
I m sorry for not being there
When they sent you to your new house
But now i come with fresh rose
Hope you feel presence of me
I am here with you
The clouds turn gloomy dark
But i have darker tears
My mouring rain
Pouring in pain
Dropped
Fallen
Stained
on your bed
I stand there, close to you
A little smile on my face
Thinking you're free, finished the race
from cruel world tricky maze
The past worries flew
Holding faith warm
Now no more harm
To blink your mind
In this wood chamber
Sleep well my dear
Sleep by the underground arm
Laying roses for you
wont cry forever for you
My tears gone dried to cry
My prayers never let you alone
Company your days in woody home
Take all our times together with you
Will keep you alive in my breathe
Each breathe i breathing with you
Keeps us together
Till i hold my last breathe
Here, witnessed by whom read this
You've met your destiny
Walk through mystery gateway
The door of eternity to a new life
The real world is just began
Soon I will come for you
Stop cry, i do
Time run fast and still running
Be near to you
I am coming for You
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lil soul, this is a wonderful poem. it flows with warmth, and has a soulful touch you write so well, big bro.G
Thanks for dropping bye....Now with roses in your hand love follows a winding road and I'm sure the damsel will be there for you at the end your feelings show thru, never alone...regards
this poem reminded me of all my beloved whom i lost.. n left me with moist eyes.........
This poem is expressing mourning and sadness within its touching expression from the beginning. I want to quote some effective lines here.............. Stop cry, i do Time run fast and still running Be near to you I am coming for You Thank you dear soul for posting this touching poem.
hugger-mugger, cloak-and-dagger! Truth dawned upon me. now I know why lot people read and commented your poems. You have gifted hand for writing love and romantic poet. 'The clouds turn gloomy dark But i have darker tears' This poem soaked and took holy bath in your phenomenal mind - a magic pot of ideas! Let me bid you adieu for the day! Hope u have smashing time unwritten soul with written heart.
'The clouds turn gloomy dark But i have darker tears..My mouring rain...Pouring in pain...Dropped..Fallen..Stained..on your bed'.....SO subtle yet extremely effective...'Time run fast and still running Be near to you..I am coming for You '... indeed these are my favourite lines in your poem (: ..well penned..thanx for sharing
There is no other person in this world to love eternally like you. The beloved is so secured even in death. Great work. I give 10+ marks.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great poem. I was impressed. It was written well with nice texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Best regards Akmal