Nigaah Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

Nigaah

Rating: 5.0

Tune mujh se nigaah kya pheri
Mera dil tujh se phir gaya ai dost.

The day you turned away your eyes
My heart has turned away from you

Copyright: © Aarzoo Mehek
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June 30th,2018

Nigaah
Saturday, June 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: betrayal
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 30 June 2018

I went through your poem both in Hindi and English. Amusing expression with lofty theme. Beautifully presented.

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Aarzoo Mehek 01 July 2018

Thank you so much for appreciating my work.

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Unnikrishnan E S 30 June 2018

Hi Aarzoo, Fantastic poem both in Urdu and the English version. Very expressive and lovely wording, on love denied. The way the lover is addressed: : Ai Dost: : in the Urdu version is marvellous. Equally good is the English version. That you are bilingual is already known to us all. But these lovely poems transgressed our expectations...

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Aarzoo Mehek 01 July 2018

Urdu is a beautiful language and expressing my emotions seems quite natural as I want these emotions to reach wider audience I'am trying to translate it in english. Thank you for the love and support.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 25 April 2020

A beautiful couplet but made me sad.

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Rajnish Manga 25 November 2018

A befitting reply to one who betrays his true friend or partner. Thanks for sharing.

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M Asim Nehal 23 October 2018

Out of sight and out of mind but out from heart, Ye Zulm hai, hai na! ! ! ! Nicely penned Aarzoo..10++++++

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 July 2018

Beautiful couplets Aarzoo. I Loved the Urdu version. It looks like coming from heart.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 July 2018

This is the one and only one option one should adopt if one faces betrayal! Wonderful contemplation my friend! Appreciated it...10

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Aarzoo Mehek 01 July 2018

Walking away with dignity saves us from further damage. Thank you for appreciating my work.

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