No Traces Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

No Traces

Rating: 5.0

The rapture I am in when I look in yr eyes
Consume my soul
I cannot dream of them anymore
For the pain is too much to bear
Since you left, I wander through
The places we once go
Trying to find you
But I find no traces of you
And the memories haunt my sadness
As it carries in my mind
And I walk with my solitary heart
Looking eternally for yr eyes to save me
No traces of them but in heaven

Saturday, May 27, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: family
Anjandev Roy 27 May 2023

This is a brilliant piece.....thanks for sharing...

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David Wood 27 May 2023

The heartbreak of family loss is enormous displayed in your wonderful tribute poem.

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M. Asim Nehal 27 May 2023

Wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing.5*****

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 May 2023

I cannot dream of them anymore For the pain is too much to bear....Liked the poigant poetic expression.....

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Pallavi Tripathi 02 June 2023

Just great

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Richard Wlodarski 01 June 2023

Sylvia Plath would be proud, LeeAnn!

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Memories, memories! As parting is painful, loss of a kin… the wound does not heal easily. But life moves on, always looking for ‘traces'. Haunting! Beautifully expressed, LeeAnn. Top score

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Nosheen Irfan 28 May 2023

Looking eternally for your eyes to save me.....what a powerful expression. To love and to lose is a situation most of the people can relate to. Well penned, !

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Rajan T Renganathan 28 May 2023

Very expressive poem, indeed.

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