Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
Ahmad Shiddiqi
Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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Rating: 5.0
(dedicated to Sr. Gabriel Gárcia Márquez, a great storyteller)

In your heart are the birds, the breeze, the flowers, the lamb, the sunshine
Much pleasure, then from thee, much more, must glow, must flow
Of snow upon the mountains and the wanderers' camps
Then how grace a rose? I feel, I know a way!

One two! One two! One two! and through and through
To see love descending and see love ascending
We count our joys not by what we have
Drawing Love's bands more tight
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Seema Chowdhury 20 May 2009
very nice and appreciative.
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Ben Gieske 18 May 2009
Something about the way this reads that lifts my heart and mind taking flight and glimpsing something new. I like these lines: And the rocks melt with the sun And I sunned it with smiles Alluring dreams voyage me
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Sandra Martyres 16 May 2009
A great tribute to Gabriel Garcia Marquez, wonderfully scripted with good imagery and a smooth poetic flow...10
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Manonton Dalan 15 May 2009
ay salam! nice poem. salamat md.
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Juan Carlos Abeti 15 May 2009
a piece of art, lovely
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Subroto Chatterjee 14 May 2009
'....With things whose tunes are played out and forgotten Away from books, away from art, the day vanished The heart recognizes thee, alone, alone, alone! Where both deliberate, love is right, the light...' Yea...all right, vivid imagery = imagination used throughout. Interesting. Cheers. Subroto
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Bonnie Collins 14 May 2009
To be honest, it is a bit lenghtly, but that is me..... I find it hard to keep treand of thought with poetry of length, however you did a very nice job none the less, the structure was very good, and a fine dedication...... Bonnie
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Ruerd Visser 11 May 2009
Nice one, you did it again. Angelgreetings from Friesland Boomfriend Ruerd
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Vidi Writes 11 May 2009
GABO... Whom we know through his famous work Who wrote the story of a Shipwrecked Sailor. Here poet has brought a story teller live in the poem. This poem has revived the thoughts about the works of a great writer. Thank you.
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Sonya Florentino 09 May 2009
always inspiring, always so full of hope....
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