Not A Limerick Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Not A Limerick

Rating: 5.0

My hair is getting thin;
my waist is getting fat.
I've whiskers on my chin
and blisters on my shin.
How can I cope with that?

Sunday, December 10, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: hair,limerick
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is syllabic verse, with six syllables in each line.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 12 December 2023

Smoky, thank you for commenting. It seems that hardly anyone comments anymore. I really appreciate it. Keep riding in the shade, my friend.

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Smoky Hoss 12 December 2023

Wow, I sure get this one Kim! Me too. Beautiful.

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Rebecca Navarre 11 January 2024

Thank you for sharing! .. And Thank you for your kindness! .. May you have a Blessed New Year! ..+++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 11 January 2024

An amazing adorable poem! .. That brings smiles! .. Ever so very many 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++

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Anjandev Roy 30 December 2023

Great write.....as usual..... thank u so much....

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Kim Barney 04 January 2024

Anjandev, thank you for the comment.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 30 December 2023

lol Kim I am almost there too Bravo TFS

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Kim Barney 04 January 2024

Dear LeeAnn, I can hardly wait to see the whiskers on your chin. : ) Thank you for the comment.

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Glen Kappy 29 December 2023

Kim, I posted a poem earlier this morning that relates to this one of yours. I thought you might enjoy it. Wishing you in advance a good new year. -Glen

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Kim Barney 04 January 2024

Glen, I have read and commented on your poem. May you have a great new year also. Thank you for commenting here.

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