O My Lily Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

O My Lily

Rating: 5.0


In this world
You are my naughty innocent beauty
You are like the butterfly on lily
You are like the angel
You are my sensual gel

I invited you to my last night cell
Your presence was like the morning bell
We enjoyed the peaceful passionate moment
In the dim light dreamy imaginative den

I couldn't sing for you a lust song
But your drunkard body was thirsty long
In your busty river I couldn't catch the fish
Whole night fishing baffled my metaphorical kiss

This morning awaken me, greeted to hymns
Ordained to live with your graceful physical theme
Come, come, live with me o my corporeal doll
Life is enjoyable, happy, sorrow, making a puzzle

Come to me to be grateful for this beautiful Sunday
On the courtyard of the Lord we need thanksgiving pray
O my Lily, my sweetheart baby
Wake up, come, look the flowers calling you
The birds, butterflies, cool breeze calling you
Come, enjoy with loving pastry

We need to go through the wet muddy path,
through the deep vista of heart
to find out our full soaked love

Our souls there will be as the romantic clouds
to fly with the flying albatrosses,
to touch the unshaped sky body,
to absorb our eternal ethereal feelings
within the souls......

Where physical poetic genre will sleep
full with dream
on the blooming buds of angelic flowers,
on the cloudy foam with Venus to shower
with the peeping eyes of Cupid

O my Lily
You are my poet, poetry
You are my awaking tree
I am what I am for your ancient scent
Still I fly with no fear of assailant



15.09.2020 Chattogram

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dedicated To A Beauty; Named By Lily S.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 15 September 2020

Heartfelt and touchy poetry. Very well incorporated. Nicely woven and perfectly articulated with eminent pauses so the reader can dwell in the feeling and feel the essence of the poet. Admirations for one of your best creativity.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 September 2020

A marvelous poem that expresses in beautiful detail the great feelings for a loved one. It captures the wonders that love brings. Lovingly penned with full of emotions.

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A.Nilabirdhwaja Singh 15 September 2020

Superb Lovely lines from the heart......

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 September 2020

Innocent beauty! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Terry Craddock 18 September 2020

Soul Must Take Flight Soar With Albatross poems infused with imagery from nature flight free flowing image which rings in heart the albatrosses is mind image nesting on my native shores on windy heights near island inlet sea or flying far out to sea over wave current ocean huge span wings outstretched gliding flying across the oceans the world is sea wind road distant journeys soul must take flight soar with albatross Dedicated to the poet MAHTAB BANGALEE.

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Valsa George 17 September 2020

This is full of passionate longing.....! It flows like a winding river with occasional churns and swirls. The ardent lover in you lets the dreamy thoughts flow in spontaneous ease. Lovely poem!

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Valsa George 17 September 2020

Our souls there will be as the romantic clouds to fly with the flying albatrosses, to touch the unshaped sky body, to absorb our eternal ethereal feelings within the souls...... A very romantic poem full of the flavor of love and the joy of blissful togetherness!

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Terry Craddock 15 September 2020

a poem infused with imagery from nature, for me the image which rings near home is 'Our souls there will be as the romantic clouds to fly with the flying albatrosses, ' For me the albatrosses is mind image nesting on my native shores, on windy heights near the sea, or flying far out to sea over wave current ocean, huge wings outstretched gliding flying across the oceans of the world.

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