O, waves! You run up an’ you rise
You thud upon the silent shores
Yearning you try to reach up high
The moon upon the distant sky
You fall back frustrated subdued
I can hear your roaring sighs;
Stretching out to my burdened heart
You resonate mute with my pains…
A perfect piece of a poem with silent rhyming, the end is really touching. Simple choice of words and a great view.10
An ode to the waves which symbolizes man and its behavior...well done...10++++++
Beautifully written. I loved the flow. Excellent the ocean theme.
What a wonderful poem with superb imagery. The high and lows of life have been vividly and beautifully depicted in this marvelous poem. Excellently written.
beautiful poem, i am feeling an emotion of unfulfillment which is resonating through this poem.......! ! !
you help my medicine to cure my pain..... i do love reading your poem.... like transcendental gallops of rest in the bodily stress... thanks you and God bless my dear friend... a salute and a star....a 10 +++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A timely, reflective piece. Well written and pleasant to read