Saturday, September 23, 2017

Oh Mirror Comments

Rating: 4.8

Oh mirror, my mere healer
Tell me where did I do wrong
Tell me if it was me or them
Who despaired my sensual soul.
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Nancy Nalbandian
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Binayakumar Mohanty 24 October 2017

Lovely poem.I enjoyed a lot.Thanks for sharing.10 Regards Binaya

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Sanghamitra Nayak 04 October 2017

Don't leave me alone- All I want to do is to throw my shoes over you And destroy you as a whole. A poem, nicely penned.

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Rini Shibu 04 October 2017

Interesting poem.. Congratulations Nancy for poem of the day

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Practicing Poetess 04 October 2017

A great write, Nancy! Congrats on making poem of the day.

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Hector Crawford 04 October 2017

A very good poem. Congrats.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 October 2017

Such a nice poem, Nancy.... congrats for being chosen... a huge 10+++++

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Very clever...and insightful... a ten and congratulations on being selected poem of the day..

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Paul Cromwell 04 October 2017

just read this Nancy - very beautiful imagery - congrats

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Rajnish Manga 04 October 2017

Just answer me back. Painstaking you were, But now you just add my pain....//.... How amazing- mirror personified with an intent of a clash. Thanks.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 04 October 2017

Why are you so silent? Don't leave me alone- All I want to do is to throw my shoes over you And destroy you as a whole. Mirror never talks but at the same time convey a lots through your reflection. An interesting poem

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 October 2017

I stumbled! ! ! But, you raised me up! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 04 October 2017

When my hands were frail to wipe my teardrops You stood beside me and shared my sorrow. Great poem shared. A sensible introspection. A huge 10++++. Congrats for the POD.

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Savita Tyagi 04 October 2017

Very enchanting poem. Life's ups and downs are faced alone. The vivid imagination and images are very catchy and keep the poem flowing. Congratulations for member poem place.

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Tom Allport 04 October 2017

a poem that on reflection tells a story of true expectations? ........wonderfully written

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Martin Moore 04 October 2017

thought provoking for sure the real me is a never ending quest! ! ! beautifully written

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Kamiel Choi 04 October 2017

I like the image with the shoes. The beginning of the poem could be more interesting in my view when you shorten it. The lines my mere healer - my mere killer could be more prominent (interpunction, whitespace?) Perhaps reading it aloud can help the poetic rhythm here

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Bill Cantrell 23 September 2017

A truly deep poem reflecting much more than a bad hair day, you watched me, saunter and soar...when stumbled the mirror was there all along, through teardrops, reflecting that for which we crave, this is excellent poetry!

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Nancy Nalbandian 25 September 2017

Thank youuu so much. There is more into the mirror. For me, mirror isnt only an object to reflect the self appearance. It is also the reflection of inner self

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 September 2017

Mirror gives wonderful reflection and this your wonderful healer too. Through mirror you discover your self attitudes with postures and gestures. Mirror answers back and reflects both joy and grief as signaled in body and mind. Amazing sharing is done here.10

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Nancy Nalbandian 25 September 2017

Thank you so much. Mirror in here is me. Sometimes all you are left in this world is only you . A person's self is the key for all secluded secrets.

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Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken 23 September 2017

Beautiful poem Nancy Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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Nancy Nalbandian 25 September 2017

Thank you so muchhh

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Nancy Nalbandian 25 September 2017

Thankkk youu

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Malcolm Two 23 September 2017

This poem is FANTASTIC keep up!

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Nancy Nalbandian 25 September 2017

Thankkk youuu

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