Oh mirror, my mere healer
Tell me where did I do wrong
Tell me if it was me or them
Who despaired my sensual soul.
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Don't leave me alone- All I want to do is to throw my shoes over you And destroy you as a whole. A poem, nicely penned.
A great write, Nancy! Congrats on making poem of the day.
Such a nice poem, Nancy.... congrats for being chosen... a huge 10+++++
Very clever...and insightful... a ten and congratulations on being selected poem of the day..
Just answer me back. Painstaking you were, But now you just add my pain....//.... How amazing- mirror personified with an intent of a clash. Thanks.
Why are you so silent? Don't leave me alone- All I want to do is to throw my shoes over you And destroy you as a whole. Mirror never talks but at the same time convey a lots through your reflection. An interesting poem
I stumbled! ! ! But, you raised me up! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
When my hands were frail to wipe my teardrops You stood beside me and shared my sorrow. Great poem shared. A sensible introspection. A huge 10++++. Congrats for the POD.
Very enchanting poem. Life's ups and downs are faced alone. The vivid imagination and images are very catchy and keep the poem flowing. Congratulations for member poem place.
a poem that on reflection tells a story of true expectations? ........wonderfully written
thought provoking for sure the real me is a never ending quest! ! ! beautifully written
I like the image with the shoes. The beginning of the poem could be more interesting in my view when you shorten it. The lines my mere healer - my mere killer could be more prominent (interpunction, whitespace?) Perhaps reading it aloud can help the poetic rhythm here
A truly deep poem reflecting much more than a bad hair day, you watched me, saunter and soar...when stumbled the mirror was there all along, through teardrops, reflecting that for which we crave, this is excellent poetry!
Thank youuu so much. There is more into the mirror. For me, mirror isnt only an object to reflect the self appearance. It is also the reflection of inner self
Mirror gives wonderful reflection and this your wonderful healer too. Through mirror you discover your self attitudes with postures and gestures. Mirror answers back and reflects both joy and grief as signaled in body and mind. Amazing sharing is done here.10
Thank you so much. Mirror in here is me. Sometimes all you are left in this world is only you . A person's self is the key for all secluded secrets.
Beautiful poem Nancy Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken
Lovely poem.I enjoyed a lot.Thanks for sharing.10 Regards Binaya