Old Photo Poem by Silentpoet Grl

Old Photo

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letting go of the old faded photo
it falls to the ground,
glass shattering in its frame
the old photo buried in brokenness
a once happy moment it captured
has soon become a faded, distant memory
leaving it laying broken on the ground
I walk away from the shattered, torn pieces
just as you did to me,
left me broken and shattered.

Thursday, October 20, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: old,leaving,memory
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin East 09 December 2011

So true. old cards and photos reminders of something lost but never forgotten. Lovely

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Cosmic Dreamer 30 October 2011

Emotions spilled upon the page in the form of words have painted pictures in the mind of a dreamer... Another very powerful poem... Well done...

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Unwritten Soul 23 October 2011

Cling..........That was awesome, i love the idea and structure..and the end just perfect, so emotional and i can feel the brokenness....be ware dont keep the glass, it will make you bleed... :) _Nice penned_Unwritten Soul

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Vipins Puthooran 22 October 2011

I understand that pain, , you written here it well.. A beautiful poem..

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Emma Zawadi Awich 20 October 2011

it has a gud concept but try to make it more profound so others can understand the pain

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