On She Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

On She

Rating: 5.0

Why the sky azure
And the breeze cool
How the snake bops
But the lily calm

She knows, she knows well
Variation of bright and pale

How the candle lost
But the moon smiles
Why the bird cries
And the plant rise

She seeds, she seeds well
Creation of love and hate

Saadat Tahir 02 June 2009

thats the panda tune...real heartfelt nature stuff very cool... verry digg loved it lts ten cheers

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Obinna Eruchie 03 June 2009

the words you penned flow nicely.

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Anjali Sinha 03 June 2009

against the azure sky and the breeze cool the melody of 'she' is sung well ill give u a tenner anjali

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Abdul Karim 04 June 2009

this is so great, I really feel the essence and the words are flowing all very Meaningful.great Job, keep up.

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Marieta Maglas 04 June 2009

''She seeds, she seeds well Creation of love and hate'' Indeed, she is the woman, the center point of life.A wonderful poem 10+++

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this is beautiful dear sir.

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Antonio Liao 08 June 2009

you have unlock the wisdom of Friendhip....a poem that incense the wisdom of emotion....thank you...one of the great of this century....may God bless you...a 10+++++

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Allemagne Roßmann 08 June 2009

She seeds, she seeds well Creation of love and hate very lively verses and carries or suaves the reader on........

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She seeds, she seeds well Creation of love and hate... Amidst all she creates wonderful world towatch n to bewatched....10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 06 June 2009

Very enigmatic writings. Sweet and bitter truths

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