One Of Those Birds Poem by Akanksha Bhatt
One Of Those Birds
Those birds are playing Hide and Seek,
But one of them is very weak.
Now they start to compile,
Husk and grains with their peak.
But it isn't easy for her,
As you know, she is very weak.
It seems like, she wanna weep,
And now she start to peep.
She is peeping in her friend's nest,
Which is located in the west.
Her friend furiously told her that,
'She cann't live with them as they aren't mad'.
And now I realized that -
There is no WEALTH without HEALTH...!
sweet as a bird....a potential poem for Children Library...easy and inspiring to read 10/10
A poem good enough to throw light on Miss Akanksha`s future prospects as a strong poet. The theme has a piercing element and is realistic in totality. Go ahead like this Akanksha.
The idea is big but you carry it with the whole strength you got...poetry way! _Soul
Very good well written birds are often associated with beauty and the use of a nest as a metaphor very good.
Very interesting views you take out of nature. Birds need to catch up and create a welfare state!
Very beautiful and interesting. I really enjoyed this great read. :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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great thought....! ! ! and i wish appreciate for that....good job...keep it up....: -) »so close«