One Way Street Poem by Aqua Flower

One Way Street

Rating: 5.0


It was a one way street
A dead end with much defeat
who can endure a life with so much needing
I put bandages on to stop the bleeding
But the wounds need to be healed
and the truth needs to be revealed
my arms ache from holding the pieces together
while you just fluff your feathers
The troubles you create are not mine
I need to be free from you
it's time!

Copyright @ Aqua Flower

Sunday, February 17, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: changes,freedom
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carl Roussell 17 February 2019

Freedom to unburden oneself and rest - may you find the chnage!

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Aqua Flower 18 February 2019

Not so much a burden when love and support is present. When there is no hope of remedy..that is when we have to move on.

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Tom Allport 08 March 2019

A creative write of knowing it is time to take flight.

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Matthew Holloway 06 March 2019

raise up your own feather and fly high, well written poem

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Aqua Flower 07 March 2019

Thanks Matthew...There is a time in life when we say, " we had enough! "

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Rebecca Navarre 19 February 2019

Very powerfully moving! .. Release and freedom from a bandaged heart! .. May each morning bring a feeling of light and brightness new! ..Thank you ever so much ever so much for sharing! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! .....................+++++

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Bill Cantrell 17 February 2019

When the hands of time point to decision...changes and freedom are not just for the one set free but for the one ready to hold her, yet the day must pass first....great poem aqua! ! !

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Aqua Flower 18 February 2019

Your comment is kind and supportive and so appreciated. Makes me hopeful for better horizons..

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Kostas Lagos 17 February 2019

Time to break free Fantastic poem

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Aqua Flower 18 February 2019

Many years in the making....it does take some time for the breaking...thank you for reading!

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