Origin To Lost Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Origin To Lost

Rating: 4.6


Moon
Crescent
On sky lap
New childlike looks
Slowly grows up lights
like the juvenile breast
To the blooming existence
Soft rosy petals beauty touch
On the ocean of full of its grace
By profuse attack of the old time
Tuning to its own font of birth
Decaying tied everything
Inviting the darkness
Losing its beauty
From lap cradle
To bareness
Shade of
Lost



17.10.2020 Chattogram

Sunday, October 18, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: existence,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 18 October 2020

Beautiful visual poetry very well executed and the journey of moon painted. Great many admirations. Moon Crescent On sky lap..... beautiful beginning. Losing its beauty From lap cradle To bareness Shade of Lost....and equally contrasting ending. Magnificent.

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Khairul Ahsan 20 October 2020

'New childlike looks Slowly grows up lights like the juvenile breast' - a beautiful expression! Loved the comment of Robert Murray Smith.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 October 2020

now a days i have noticed most of ur poems are breasted

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Kostas Lagos 18 October 2020

A fascinating poem Mahtab!

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 October 2020

Blooming existence of life! ! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Paul Brookes 18 October 2020

A beautifully evocative poem enjoyed thanks

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