Opposite Competent Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Opposite Competent

Rating: 4.6


I am a sin, lie, anger, violence!
Not I am a sinner, liar, angrier, violent!

I am a sin
Because the virtue is hidden in my bin!
I am a lie
Because the truth is my secret dye!
I am an anger
Because love is in my lusty bar!
I am a violence
Because the peace stays in my illusory trance!

O No, Not I am sinner, liar, angrier, violent
For the coin of virtue, truth, love, and peace
I am just the opposite competent!



-July 23,2018 Chattogram

Monday, August 10, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: hiding,secret,wickedness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 10 August 2020

The conception of this virtuous thought is beautiful. Very well woven. Good poetry. Admirations.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 10 August 2020

Nicely put. I am a sinner committing sin like the rock singer

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Gajanan Mishra 10 August 2020

Peace stays in illusory trance! Truth of time

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M Asim Nehal 10 August 2020

Humans hidden truth nicely explored and exposed by this beautiful poem. The opposite does signifies the absence and presence of one or the other. Nice poem, thought provoking 10+++

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Bharati Nayak 10 August 2020

I am a sin Because the virtue is hidden in my bin! I am a lie Because the truth is my secret dye! I am an anger Because love is in my lusty bar! - - Virtue and vice are but part of nature.Virtue shines against the vice.A thought provoking poem.

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Poetic Sky 23 August 2020

What opposite They ATTRACT EACH OTHER TO GIVE BIRTH WORLD WILL END IF YOU STOP. YOU ARE NOW THINJ ON MB OF BD..... LIFE IS SHORT GOALS ARE MANY HOLES YOU FIND

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 August 2020

A vivid portrayal of double personality, secrecy and wickedness. A kind of character that is hard to deal with. Cleverly written.

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O Poet Me 10 August 2020

Some People They Thrive On translating others poem and reach at the top like valture. This poem Symbolizes Their Characteristic. They Live On Caracas. What Do You Say? You Are NOT ONE OF THEM. YOU WRITE ORIGINAL POEM, DON'T YOU ? ? ? ?

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Soran M. H 10 August 2020

I am a sin Because the virtue is hidden in my bin!

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Soran M. H 10 August 2020

well done you have gathered all paradoxes in your wonderful text in the era of lie and dishonesty, but your heart as a poet is full of truth and love and peace 10+ fav list too

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