Unwritten Soul

Orison (Give Me Your Smile) - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Waves meet the end
When the ocean reach the land
Water the sand, before your feet
Two worlds meet

The future is far way, at the end of the world
In the horizon still our wonder
High mountain we climbed
Seek for this secret, far sighted distance
Nothing...Do you see the end? ...Nothing
We can't see the ending of everything
Now we learned, future is unpredictable
Not yet to cherish
Not yet to cry

Look back the past
Broken dreams pull your tears
Don't cry my dear soon it will over
All we got not will always be good
Because, It's not heaven we live on
Always have true hopes, never get down
So smile for a little, keep hopes alive

Chase on the light
In depth of the dark
Could be faint but still bright
Bright and brighter when it's dark and darker
The past has gone
The future still untold
We need the light to move on
Stay in sadness or seek for happiness

Shed you tears, don't cry my dear
Paradise is not where we living now
To promise you will happy forever
Just give your smile to me
I'll lend my hand for you
We will cross the ocean,
Chase the basement of the rainbow
Till we reach the horizon
The end of the world

If we are the ships, lost in the ocean
All we need, a direction
You as a captain with options
Decide your choice
To sink in the middle or
To harbor your dream
Far in the ocean
As the waves will meet the end
As it wash the sand
Soon we will find a land
Back home and safe from the stormy seas..

The hope always exist for whom believe it
The dark is forever if we deny the present of the light

-ORISON is the Introduction of my upcoming poems, collectively
known as 'Rise from The Ashes (RFTA) '..and the theme is about to be free.
I try to bring some dark more, but in positive..

it wont be sad as it still come from my hand, Unwritten Soul hahahahaha
Inspired by people, I not promise the collection of RFTA will be good or perfect write coz i am not good writer, i just can offer what i can give, my thought and support..Sorry it this introduction still have some weak somewhere, just write it right now...: P

1st poem from RFTA: End of Time

Comments about Orison (Give Me Your Smile) by Unwritten Soul

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (2/26/2018 7:51:00 AM)

    Past has gone, future is untold, hence present is better than those. We must have smiles instead of sadness. We must hope for better future. Perfect works of present will lead us to bright future. Fantastic expression has been made on time and life journey. I quote.......
    The past has gone
    The future still untold
    ......... .......... .......... ............ ......... .....
    The hope always exist for whom believe it
    The dark is forever if we deny the present of the light
    Nice work.
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  • (4/16/2013 9:23:00 AM)

    A lovely and compelling piece, Soul- with the alluring promise of more.
    We look forward to those works!
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  • (11/24/2011 12:58:00 AM)

    Wow! man! this is a masterpiece, , its a very fine piece of art, a beautiful painting indeed.it got everything Soul...there's an artist, i am not sure who it was between HENRY MATISE and VAN GHORGH, who painted that painting called THE WINDOW...looking at the pic you can just say jah, he just painted what you can outside the window, but the meaning is deep, beyond the trees and flowers you see on the pic, ,

    'the past has gone,
    the future still untold
    we need the light to move on'
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  • (11/1/2011 5:56:00 AM)

    Yup! Past is past, future is uncertain or certainly unpredictable. So we are left with single choice live in the present world. It is upto us whether we glorify or life or cut a sorry face 24/7.
    'The past has gone
    The future still untold
    We need the light to move on
    Stay in sadness or seek for happiness'
    As matter of fact, It was my privilege to read these lines which have behemoth effect on my life that is me in every life. A UNIVERSAL THEME runs all the poems. Good narrative technique employed by the poetess. Lo! Unwritten Soul A big thumbs up to you!
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  • (10/25/2011 1:25:00 PM)

    As a matter of fact, a true and pure sense of humanity and solidarity refinement...nice work (Report) Reply

  • (10/24/2011 1:49:00 AM)

    An insightful wisdom you had presented here poetically, and a nice metaphor too, well crafted thoughts. (Report) Reply

  • (10/22/2011 7:51:00 PM)

    i am always amazed with how you write....full of brilliant images.....you are like a high standard camera that can capture everything you see...ten for this one.... (Report) Reply

  • Elena Sandu (10/21/2011 6:52:00 AM)

    Lovely thoughts, lovely feelings your words are spreading! You give us the choise and the chance of hope. Yes we can change the world through the spread of goodness and smiles! That is the direction I would choose if you would make me a captain. Wish I could change the rebellious ones in world's lovers, lol.
    Lovely poem, thank you for share,10
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  • (10/16/2011 10:17:00 PM)

    The poem runs into past, present and future so spontaneously and make us feel that life is great in spite of sweet as well as sour experiences.Confidence and hope always guide us to take up life spiritedly.The contrast between Black and white is beautifully pictured! vocabulary, imagery and tone of the poem is superb.Wonderful piece of work. Marks 10+ (Report) Reply

  • Jacqui Broad (10/16/2011 3:38:00 AM)

    You painted a brilliant picture of hope. It ain't over till the fat lady sinks. Mind the pun... :) (Report) Reply

  • (10/14/2011 3:27:00 PM)

    So lovely, as always. You've never disappointed me with your work. I'm sure RFTA will be a spectacular project. I look forward to seeing more of it. (Report) Reply

  • (10/14/2011 9:50:00 AM)

    this is a great write with soul and hope for the live we wish to have, the heart comes through really strongly keep it up please as you can write good poems (Report) Reply

  • (10/14/2011 9:38:00 AM)

    strong with hope, and a hunger for the wonder of life! (Report) Reply

  • (10/14/2011 7:13:00 AM)

    As someone said in his comment: you are a bright soul in a dark shadow
    you're so bright continue to share more poems: °)
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  • (10/14/2011 6:49:00 AM)

    I love this lil bro..i will always have a smilw for you as you are a bright soul in a dark shadow...always brightening my day..and u r an extremely skillful and enjoyable writer.
    Big sis
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  • Bernard Snyder (10/13/2011 12:26:00 PM)

    What a wonderfully expressed 'piece' 'US! ! I will patiently await the others by which I know will be 'hits' as well. Keep doing your thing'. I give this one a 10' as well. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (10/13/2011 11:17:00 AM)

    It's an amazing poem, soul, , ,
    You opened the casement of hope here, wherefrom I can now see this world but future is still untold but I can live here with the hope of present..here hope is like a boost and a boon.
    And the light of our breath is still burning here even if we are in a dilemma.. And blessing me this light of hope to live..
    Hope thrust us to sail in this ebb and flow of life..
    This poem is still such a tool to hope for the best things of life..
    You written so well soul...
    Top marks for you..
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  • Hans Vr (10/13/2011 9:17:00 AM)

    Wow, soul, this poem is great.
    A great wisdom wonderfully expressed.
    The eternal dualism of things on earth
    But the light is never far away.
    Keep your great light burning brightly.
    I really look forward to your new poems.
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  • (10/13/2011 8:57:00 AM)

    Its looking good my friend.
    Deny the present of the light,
    I love that line. A great start to
    Your new poems.
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 13, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 13, 2011

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