! ! Our Comet Wise Poem by Bob Blackwell
! ! Our Comet Wise
Our comet with a fiery tail
moves slowly as it enters
heavens doors, to illuminate
the way to peace, the bliss,
the happiness that waits,
for all that seek to live a truth.
Our Comet Wise, tours our
Universe, it swoops through
the heavens with the speed
of a shooting star, and the ease
of a wandering albatross.
Leaving behind the cosmic
sprinkling of knowledge, with
the answers, to our
puzzle of enlightenment.
Is it wise to eat the solar dust
it leaves? Must we chase its
trail of light? Can we solve?
Rubik Heavens secret code,
for happiness and bliss?
Yes, we must follow and keep to
the path, the journey that it makes,
not deviating, being firm and resolute.
Just focus on its light, a light that’s
special, as it highlights all our faults,
and shows the path, the way of truth.
The same light will also warm, soften,
knead our hearts and minds, till
we can feel abundant love for all.
Our hearts will now feel the pain
of other’s in distress, we’ll want to
aid and with compassion, will give help.
Our own minds suffering will now lessen;
problems shared are problems halved.
We must also remain still, fall quiet,
from time to time, in the silent centre
of our Comet Wise. Leaving thoughts
behind, we’ll follow breath, go with
the whispered hush, the noiseless flow,
the silent path, to a place where souls
combine and we can see we are One
‘This is the way to our Enlightenment’
09-11-2008
A poem that is almost spiritual in it's intensity. A poem that shows the wonder of being and existing in this universe. Lovely!
You have excelled with this marvellous piece Bob, the wisdom of a Welshman, honest and true, 10 Lynda xx
Stunning, fanatstic read Bob, the wisdom in this piece is mind shattering. Well done.
Comet/wise metaphor is simply great; a great thought. All that followed was wisdom of an honest thinker.....faascinating piece indeed.............10
an exciting trip to the infinites vast world, reminding us that we are all one, as creation of god, though we may look externally different, we are the same under the garb of clothes! dear bob, you think so beautifully! thanks, for sharing this.
Bob im loving your work, greatness in your free formed lines gives this an excellent edge to your creative penning..
Well written poem with good expressions. Enjoyed the peregrination.
Enjoyed the read Bob You write in free form with seeming ease and get your message across with clarity whilst I stick with the discipline of set forms
a cosmic metaphor for the inner bliss that all us want to fill in our inner cloister porfound layers of thought unfolding through your sunlit verses.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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This is a warm and thoughtful poem about our universe. It was like traveling the planets - thanks for the exciting trip, Bob! A '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn