Our House-Maid's Daughter Poem by Sathya Narayana

Our House-Maid's Daughter

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OUR HOUSE MAID'S DAUGHTER
I looked one more time at the scar
on her pretty forehead.
Our house-maid's sweet little daughter.
She is just four years old.

Endured many scares and black scars
along with mother, so bold
facing tantrums of sot-father.
She is just four years old.

Today came she with news to share.
With puerile fervor told
"Becomes bride my father's sister! "
She is just four years old.

"He is as strong as a wild boar
good groom; not a drunkard."
Shocked; saw those deeper inner scars.
She is just four years old.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is a true story
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Herbert Nehrlich1 07 February 2009

I may be one of the few who would appreciate this poem. It is very good! Indeed. H

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Seema Aarella 07 February 2009

Its a difficult life for all those women and children....whose men are drunkards! These children at their tender age endure such harshness that their innocence gets killed! ! ! ! ! ! I truly appreciate ur work!

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Seema Chowdhury 07 February 2009

thanks for sharing this poem. life is so difficult for so many people. wish there was something we could do to take away this pain.

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Greenwolfe 1962 07 February 2009

Anything involving a child is criminal. Should be regarded as such. All children have a right to be free of bondage. No matter what kind. I hate even reading of such as this. GW62

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Sandra Fowler 07 February 2009

One can only pity this little girl who has never been allowed to enjoy the innocence that every child deserves. Excellent work. Warm regards, Sandra

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 23 February 2009

OMG...DOES DAT HAPPEN? ? HAD HEARD GALS BEING MARRIED OFF AT 11...BUT THIS IS TOO MUCH...

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Mark R Slaughter 16 February 2009

sad story but nice poem Mark

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Miriam Maia Padua 14 February 2009

sad story, , , it squeeze my heart....make me frown.... deprived of her happy childhood.....so touching...reality hurts.... very wisely described and wonderfully written....

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sad reality/ wonderful poetry

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rago rago 12 February 2009

true and unfortunate to note the pathetic condition. well written.

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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