Our Nature Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Our Nature

Rating: 5.0


My wooden roof dressed in white
Bridge over passing lake did same
The stream dress too got white spots
Tress beside it are in green and white
And I dressed in black to take a walk

Black road too changed this morning
Along with the beach sand and rocks
Far lazy sun is rising from oceans bed
So my feet felt blue waters too chill
Soon I walked back lonely to my park

The Park bench is wet and lonely too
Green grass is covered fat in white
Tree leafs are thick and paused for long
Soft kissing wind is moving my lips
I started to see a change all around me

My window glass is singing same song
Long glowing street lamps sings same
But not those long continuous firing shots
And burning fire all along the red stream
It tells nature changed but not, our nature

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prince Obed de la Cruz 09 January 2010

i've rated this one 10!

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Dr.ram Mehta 09 January 2010

It's a good poem. I appreciate the poem. Thank you

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Marieta Maglas 09 January 2010

wonderful descriptive poem, wonderful epithets 10/10

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Janell Cressman 09 January 2010

wow, amazing as always, you are so talented! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (10)

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Louis Rams 09 January 2010

the last line says it all.

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Antonio Liao 11 January 2010

a living nature captures time in the moment of the presence.... like a dream within a dream....a mixed feeling of awake and sleep..... a realization of reality exist....a good starter of the study of Philosophies...God bless a 10 +++++

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Joseph Poewhit 11 January 2010

The park bench is a front row seat.

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Padmapriya Boddapati 10 January 2010

Such alas! is human nature.Good write with beautiful imagery.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 10 January 2010

The Nature does its duties without fear or favour, unlike the mankind, just like what you have stated at the end.

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Eyan Desir 09 January 2010

Nice poem I am trying to change for the best.... anyway well done 10s

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