Don't swim carelessly in this sea of life
Your existence is everything, but infinite
As your life ceases
So will you drown
In an expanse of parched miseries.
©Aarzoo Mehek
Yes, you must smim carefully in the turbulent sea of life! Thoughtfully put
Very realistic depiction of life. Shows your deep insight. You have said a lot in a few words. Very thoughtful n philosophical write.10
Hi Aarzoo, So will you drown In an expanse of parched miseries. The contrasting images make good poetry, enjoyable reading. As usual, Aarzoo's poem is philosophical, deeply touching the heart, plays on the emotions of the reader.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
And so it goes. Nicely written, Aarzoo