Pebbles Poem by Susan Williams

Pebbles

Rating: 5.0


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Pebbles of time
washing down the streams
piling up
on the beaches
where boots on the ground
without foreseeable end
came to shield and protect
waiting a long time
for their story to be told.
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~~~~~~~~~~©March 1,2022 Susan Williams

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 03 March 2022

And who will tell their story? Nobody better than Susan Williams!

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Susan Williams 06 March 2022

Wow! ! Kim! ! ! that remark just blew my mind! ! ! ! Thank you, thank you, thank you! ! !

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Susan Williams 23 July 2022

Kim, you are PoemHunters' delight! ! ! ! !

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Savita Tyagi 03 April 2022

Read this lovely poem in the list of best member poems. Congratulations. The two independent thoughts connected so brilliantly impress upon my heart so deep, with your word power

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Susan Williams 03 April 2022

Thank you for looking under the hood of this poem, Savita. The larger pallet of words I collect the better!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 September 2022

This is really a wonderful poem. Many things have changed but you are stable at your position. This volumnously speaks about your personality....Great!

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Jayne Louise Davies 05 September 2022

Amazing, wonderful write! Brilliant Susan x Well done!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 September 2022

Wonderful poetry entitled, 'Pebbles'. A precise and precious poem to be treasured forever!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 August 2022

To My Favourites these PEBBLES, once again thank you somuch for sharing this brilliant poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 August 2022

I have enjoyed tremendously this fascinating poem, its meaning is endlessly put inside. How many times we read this fantastic poem, dear Susan, more things we unravel. Who could think that pebbles are able to do that? This is the Mystery of a 'simple' which in reality is NOT that simple!

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