For every occurrence
There is relevance
But hidden with evidence
If one has perseverance
To know it with infinite endurance
And displaying prudence
Taking more of guidance
Maintaining strict balance
Devoid from wild violence
Having complete confidence
In the valuable rhymes of Terence
Which makes one smile with patience
The glowing candles witness radiance
Offering way for a precious day to grace!
I heard about the birthday wish, You served it with an advice dish. Happy birthday to your friend, though belated.
A good day for the better days To know it with infinite endurance And displaying prudence Taking more of guidance Maintaining strict balance Devoid from wild violence Having complete confidence
Respected Rekhajee you have strictly maintained the rhythm of 'ce' in your poem. but you have greeted someone on birthday, you have not mention the person. any way please convey my wishes too in the same line which you will get in my poem ''A LONG MARCH'. with kind regards ramesh rai
every day is precious so we need to make the most of it. a good read
What a beautiful poem! /love the rhyme-pattern, , [Excellent poetry]
This is a well written piece' Rekha! A lot of times we don't know how 'precious' the day really is. Thanks for sharing such a lovely write!
A birthday wish full of wisdom written in very nice and melodious verses. It is already 2 weeks later, but I still wish both you a happy belated birthday.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The precious day with auspicious moments when somebody discovers himself or herself as reborn with the adjectives of quality and quantity mentioned by you here to be imperative...i hope the attempted person has many happy returns of the day