Precious Day Poem by Rekha Mandagere

Precious Day

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For every occurrence
There is relevance
But hidden with evidence
If one has perseverance
To know it with infinite endurance
And displaying prudence
Taking more of guidance
Maintaining strict balance
Devoid from wild violence
Having complete confidence
In the valuable rhymes of Terence
Which makes one smile with patience
The glowing candles witness radiance
Offering way for a precious day to grace!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 30 November 2011

The precious day with auspicious moments when somebody discovers himself or herself as reborn with the adjectives of quality and quantity mentioned by you here to be imperative...i hope the attempted person has many happy returns of the day

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C. P. Sharma 29 November 2011

I heard about the birthday wish, You served it with an advice dish. Happy birthday to your friend, though belated.

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Kee Thampi 29 November 2011

A good day for the better days To know it with infinite endurance And displaying prudence Taking more of guidance Maintaining strict balance Devoid from wild violence Having complete confidence

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 24 November 2011

words used made rich the poem. shan

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Ramesh Rai 23 November 2011

Respected Rekhajee you have strictly maintained the rhythm of 'ce' in your poem. but you have greeted someone on birthday, you have not mention the person. any way please convey my wishes too in the same line which you will get in my poem ''A LONG MARCH'. with kind regards ramesh rai

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Heather Wilkins 12 August 2013

every day is precious so we need to make the most of it. a good read

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Neetha Sasidharan 05 January 2012

awesome rhymes.....really grt..

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Vipins Puthooran 10 December 2011

What a beautiful poem! /love the rhyme-pattern, , [Excellent poetry]

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Bernard Snyder 07 December 2011

This is a well written piece' Rekha! A lot of times we don't know how 'precious' the day really is. Thanks for sharing such a lovely write!

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Hans Vr 30 November 2011

A birthday wish full of wisdom written in very nice and melodious verses. It is already 2 weeks later, but I still wish both you a happy belated birthday.

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