Pride Poem by Bob Blackwell

Pride

Rating: 5.0


A secretary bird has
Pale grey feathered top,
three quarter dark black pants,
below long pink slender legs,
wings make bustled skirt, within
a grey black bordered tail,
Its tasseled head has orange face,
grey blue bill, and hazel eyes.
He gives a pompous grin, head
turned up, he parades, he struts,
a slow flamboyant stride, that says
I am the most superior bird.


Bob Blackwell
19 February 2007

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Harris 20 February 2007

Bob, I loved this poem. The last line. I am the most superior bird. Lovely way to finish this short, but majestic piece. Given it top marks. The description of this superior bird was great. A gently flowing poem. Thanks for sharing it. David

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A most superior piece. t x

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Patricia Gale 25 February 2007

Splendid piece, grand imagery.

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Ritty Patnaik 19 August 2009

what a dear poem! the male birds are always vain, b'cause they haveto show off to their partners! , i hope the lady bird is well dressed too! dear bob, your description is so apt, and poem excellently written. ritty

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Michael Moorcroft 18 August 2009

Love the well described details of the bird.10++

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rago rago 10 July 2009

a good write and beautifully given pride a pride...........

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I am the most superior bird......beautiful bird with clumsy legs... that makes him toshy from all........pride is always hurt..... God not making perfect creation...... beautiful write sir....10

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Francesca Johnson 21 March 2007

Even if you've never seen a secretary bird, this well-described piece paints a picture of it. Clearly. Well done, Bob. Love, Fran xxx

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