Pronunciation 2 Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

My tongue twisted and even stuck up in the roof of my mouth trying to pronounce each strange words. You give me a hard time in this piece. So sorry I couldn't appreciate the composition. However, the stanzas written in English is quite admirable. Thanks

i find this one excellent. the last stanza said it all. 'you could leave each moment on repeat and never distinctly feel a beginning or and ending apart from your glimpse generated.' a ten

Wonderful dedication to Almedia, well written poem......

An interesting dedication to Almedia. Adorable.

great tribute to Mr. Knight.............wel expressed thoughts!

words are wonderful - it seems you take great joy in them.

interesting concept.....if you have a chance, read my poem 'Found In Translation'

tht´s more likely sure this one i like it better

tribute again... nice piece luwi

hey why do you write with many languages? ? ? we aren't very intelligent like you! ! ! haha...anyway if you wrote with the language of the mars it will be wonderful...yea it will.....keep impressing...