Rain - 1 Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rain - 1

Rating: 5.0


Rains shoot the parched field
And penetrate like bullets
A great gift to plants.


Copyright 2019, Rose Marie Juan - Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 31 May 2019

Brilliant brevity and such a powerful metaphor. Indeed tropical rains can be so strong and can penetrate the dry ground like bullets a great gift to plants, This must be about the tropical rains. A very impressive poem about Rain. Thank you so much for sharing.10+++++++++++

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 June 2019

Simply heavenly haiku, dear Ate Rose........10++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 31 May 2019

Ever so moving to nature and life! .. Beautifully and powerfully painted! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing! ..10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ................+++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 May 2019

Rain drops! ! Watering the plants. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rain is the best gift ever for plants, trees and the entire green vegetation. A succinct poem so well worded.

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Rob Lamberton 12 May 2025

We can be like a parched field or a well watered plant!

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Nabakishore Dash 03 May 2023

A great gift to plants means to all.very intelligent writing Mam.

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Anjandev Roy 16 December 2019

gift to plants......fine. Thank u. anjandev roy.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 June 2019

Wow! A wonderful poem...short but highly expressive! The fabulous use of simile 'penetrate like bullets' is the epitome of this amazing work...............10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 June 2019

ADDITION: since you have read it like a jetplane in the sky. So OVER. Read this precious poem slowly and let the words penetrate your mind. I like very much this brevity from the Great Poetess. Thank you so much for sharing. God's Blessings in Abundance for thee and thy beloved family. Amen...............Sent with love and care, Sylvia FC

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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