Rains shoot the parched field
And penetrate like bullets
A great gift to plants.
Copyright 2019, Rose Marie Juan - Austin, All Rights Reserved
Simply heavenly haiku, dear Ate Rose........10++++++++++++
Ever so moving to nature and life! .. Beautifully and powerfully painted! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing! ..10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ................+++++
Rain drops! ! Watering the plants. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Rain is the best gift ever for plants, trees and the entire green vegetation. A succinct poem so well worded.
A great gift to plants means to all.very intelligent writing Mam.
Wow! A wonderful poem...short but highly expressive! The fabulous use of simile 'penetrate like bullets' is the epitome of this amazing work...............10
ADDITION: since you have read it like a jetplane in the sky. So OVER. Read this precious poem slowly and let the words penetrate your mind. I like very much this brevity from the Great Poetess. Thank you so much for sharing. God's Blessings in Abundance for thee and thy beloved family. Amen...............Sent with love and care, Sylvia FC
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Brilliant brevity and such a powerful metaphor. Indeed tropical rains can be so strong and can penetrate the dry ground like bullets a great gift to plants, This must be about the tropical rains. A very impressive poem about Rain. Thank you so much for sharing.10+++++++++++