Rain On Me Poem by Kewayne Wadley

Rain On Me

Rating: 4.6


The thought of you falls like rain, Enveloped in an necessary urgentcy, If at all possible, let this rain fall for an eternity, Slow presses of each drop caresses the lips, As for you, As for I, As each touch awakens this feeling I can't describe, Each drop touches my soul, (I listen) with intent that tomorrow will be greater than today, In hopes your smile would never have a reason to withdrawal, Each drop that falls is a piece of you, Although is impossible to catch every drop, You never have a reason to fret as time has no bearence when it comes to you, Each touch draws me closer to the beauty that is you, In every way, As I'd never want you to do anything you'd truly never want to do, Not in the means of conveinent, But as the present, as it's meant to be

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 22 October 2014

every word has come from your heart. touching

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Ken E Hall 13 June 2015

The rain of love that falls may it keep on falling for you for ever...as its meant to be...regards

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Bri Edwards 30 July 2018

p.s. i like the title, and the analogy of raindrops for thoughts. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 30 July 2018

there are a couple of misspellings. And: bearance? i've heard of forbearance. maybe you mean bearing**? ** relation or relevance. the case has no direct bearing on the issues synonyms: relevance, pertinence, connection, appositeness, germaneness, importance, significance, application i like the poem. it was entertaining. bri ;)

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Ramesh Rai 05 June 2018

Rain on me my dear friend with your thoughts and emotions to make me drenched. Love your write.

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Savita Tyagi 01 December 2015

So soft and beautiful! Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 June 2015

This feeling i can't describe! Nice work.

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Kewayne Wadley

Kewayne Wadley

Groton, Connecticutt
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