The thought of you falls like rain, Enveloped in an necessary urgentcy, If at all possible, let this rain fall for an eternity, Slow presses of each drop caresses the lips, As for you, As for I, As each touch awakens this feeling I can't describe, Each drop touches my soul, (I listen) with intent that tomorrow will be greater than today, In hopes your smile would never have a reason to withdrawal, Each drop that falls is a piece of you, Although is impossible to catch every drop, You never have a reason to fret as time has no bearence when it comes to you, Each touch draws me closer to the beauty that is you, In every way, As I'd never want you to do anything you'd truly never want to do, Not in the means of conveinent, But as the present, as it's meant to be
The rain of love that falls may it keep on falling for you for ever...as its meant to be...regards
p.s. i like the title, and the analogy of raindrops for thoughts. bri :)
there are a couple of misspellings. And: bearance? i've heard of forbearance. maybe you mean bearing**? ** relation or relevance. the case has no direct bearing on the issues synonyms: relevance, pertinence, connection, appositeness, germaneness, importance, significance, application i like the poem. it was entertaining. bri ;)
Rain on me my dear friend with your thoughts and emotions to make me drenched. Love your write.
So soft and beautiful! Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
every word has come from your heart. touching