some people are a distraction,
Our world is coming to a distruction,
Everyone is a corruption,
Needing a revolution.
Government doesn't care,
For the slavory over there,
So many people are scared,
For what's happening everywhere.
Children are starving,
Families are in needing,
People are dying,
But no one is caring.
This needs to come to a stop,
The wrong people are at the top,
Too many are prone to flip flop,
But then I'm just a teenie-bop.
Suicide happens every day,
A lot of people are getting low pay,
Those people want to get away,
Or die today.
What is wrong?
This has been going on,
For very long,
Yet no one is strong.
Strong enough to stop this mess,
It's so sad - it's not even the best,
The wrong people are becoming pests,
But no one will confess.
I hope God will make things better,
For tomorrow to live and today a go getter,
And for people to live in peace forever,
And to have peace together.
Wonderful poem, I like it. Friend, can I humbly ask you to read my poem revolution in evolution and tears of a soldier. Please
This straight from your heart isn't? your words are elegant. God is on the throne showing mercy to this world his creation. Keep up the good work my fellow poetess. (8
Very well writtten, I was asking questions while reading, it was a great read.! (:
Great potentials I see in you...great work. Your are indeed years ahead of your peers. I luv ur lines, shows great knowledge of world affairs..kudos
So so great a poem not just for a 15 year old but for any poet. Still wonder at how you managed to match all those lines and yet make sense in every sentence. Lovely poem indeed, it reminded me of Tracy Chapman's 'Talkin' of a revolution' song. Keep it up Alicia.
I love your poem Alicia, you are a very talented writer and i hope you do well [3
i love this poem and you are a great poet.. i add you to my favorites!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
An in depth retrospection to the hidden rebel in your heart; ignited and ready to enlighten the world with a message! ! !