Ride The Rays And Come To Me..The Melody Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

Ride The Rays And Come To Me..The Melody

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The melody, you and me

say it again and let it rain
LOVE TO ME,

In the castle, above the sea,
waiting the blue..
waiting the white,
waiting the boat,

TO THE WIND SCREAMING
you to float,
to climb the castle
to kill ogre,

behind the gate, your soul mate
about to vanish to suffocate

where is the great? where is the key?

it is with the saint confess to me,

why to hesitate?

it is your fate being me,

on my tears stop to skate.

so much hunger, so much thirst,
for the taste,
why to waste our moments, ?
open the ways toward me
.................
Iam the chaste, for you the nights
I maintain, for you remain,

congested heart, , blocking the vein,

THE SOUL IN PAIN, reduce the strain
and live in me,

obtain the days, the sorrow contain,

ride the rays and come to me
the heart..you gain,

it is the fate, you are the soul
she is the mate,

she can't bear your princess,
you are the peer,
come to her with her share
all your fear

no one can
rate more than her,

break the chain, both flare,

her place above
flower, above tree,

soar with her,
she is the bee,

come on date,
why to wait?

where is the great?
find the key

very far throw, deep in oceans,
deep in sea,

THE MELODY you AND she

she is yours, you are hers,

TOGETHER YOU..
A MELODY

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rafique Farooqi 24 November 2009

The melody, you and me say it again and let it rain LOVE TO ME, In the castle, above the sea, waiting the blue.. waiting the white, waiting the boat, IT IS VERY TOUCHING POEM, AND AMAZING WRITE

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Meggie Gultiano 09 November 2009

So beautiful..Very romantic piece..Love it soooomuch, Tamara Love♥ ♥ ♥ Meggie

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Rachel Butler 08 November 2009

'Ride the rays and come to me the heart, you gain' Rachel Ann Butler

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Patrick A. Martin 16 October 2009

This is a marvalous poem Tamara and coming from me that is saying something as I usally avoid LOVE POEMS like the plague.--10

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Joe Rosochacki 15 October 2009

Great visualizations. How true the premise.

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Akram Saqib 02 July 2017

nicely written poem expressing desire to meet the mate

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Souren Mondal 18 November 2015

A well written poem about love and expression of love.. Thanks for sharing..

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 10 June 2010

poetic indeed... deserving to be in the top 500... no flaws... no errors.. yup the best!

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Hadeer Ahmed 07 June 2010

very nice really :) keep it up... i like ur style

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Ken E Hall 08 December 2009

Just a corker of a poem...a cork holding in champange of words a melody of bubbles with love ++++10 regards

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