Early this morning
in your temple where you live,
I stand before your holy shrine
ringing the bells of love.
Would you come down from your holy shrine,
my lover of my heart to look at me.
I need only your eyes to see me now.
I was dying with longing the whole night
sleepless was I on my cozy bed.
Before the morning cock crows
I came to you to your holy shrine
to tell you that I love you
more than anyone else in this world.
I die with longing for your presence.
I need only your eyes to see me now.
Your articulation of ‘I love you’ is utterly perfumed and eternal….your devotion to almighty is laudably articulated in divine tone! My favorite lines: “Early this morning/in your temple where you live/I stand before your holy shrine/ringing the bells of love”. Moreover, the appended photography appears pious and gracious! (Part II)
Would you come down from your holy shrine/my lover of my heart to look at me….I am absolutely delighted with your poetic expression! I can hear from distance the ringing of bells of love! ... Would you come down from your holy shrine/my lover of my heart to look at me…so sublime! I relish each line of this magnificent poem (Part I)
Filled with longing and passion. Love does seem to go hand-and-hand with sleeplessness. I swear we all go back to being teenagers when we fall in love with that certain someone and quite frankly it is as sweet and heavenly as this poem! ! ! Very well written! 10++++++++++
oh my! I really don't know how to express my appreciation! such a beautiful write! a big 10+++ dear Tony! You are one of my favorite poet and this poem goes to My poemlist
Beautiful romantic poem, especially the words captures ones heart. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.
I die with longing for your presence. I need only your eyes to see me now. A beautiful poem of pure love.
Was struck by the thoughtful title of the poem itself. Literally ran out of words to express appreciation for this deep, pensive poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A highly commendable piece of work my friend! I vote this great poem with a 10 …….To MyPoemList