Room Of Gloom Poem by Asif Baloch

good theres someone at the door Trying to open and enter the gloom--- Dont cover your face dont silently cry for if u do therll be no more lovely poems from you love anjali +10

wow....amazing. dark, deep, all together a masterpiece Seb

very very heartfelt...almost as if you were indeed sad when you penned this piece...this one really seems to have come from a lonely heart....do try your pen at something like a soft romantic scene between a young couple.still in the phase of unprofessed love...i have a feeling youll do marvellously... best wishes aijaz...i enjoy reading your poems.

who said you are all alone. you have so many friends on poemhunter website. pl share your grief and pain and let it all pour out. then you'll feel fresh and brite and will start anew.

Roads of noise and madness.... outside Halls of loneliness...Inside Where every one is holding a candle.. and Dirt covering their eyes Such a great poem.... Loved how it explains the inner Side of ourselves

A sorrowfully realistic poem.

Is the room of gloom waiting there? Are we going to enter? Lovely and touchy composition. 10 from me.

open your gloomy room out, Aijaz...much fresh air and dazzling light waiting there to enter...A well written poem on frustrating lonely feels...10

Nice one, lot of feelings, lot of pain, beautiful poem.

Eloquent.....painfully beautiful........and thoughtful indeed.......10+