Running race was over;
Rabbit was musing hard
How come he lost to her?
Shameful and sad; so bad
As outside darkness spread
From inside of his heart,
He met her in her nest;
Asked how she managed that
Tortoise smiled and said:
Over those drinks you had,
Inside those pumping talks,
Last night two pills I packed!
28th May 2009
Oh this is sooo very sweet and humorous at the same time...... I enjoyed the theme you have given this... Very nicly written, and easy to read and enjoy... Bonnie
a joke that leads to believe that life is just a game to play....you make my day.... friend...God bless...hope and pray that this poem will be printed and included in all magazine a 10+++++
Hahaha.......... now isnt this amusing? Beautiful, well though of........ reminds me of the way i write poems, in a story or moral pattern! Great, great- made my day Kesav :)
light....but deep. this is the way to convey an important message, i guess. 10 to you sir. thank you.
you penned an interesting tale on how the hare wondered on how he was defeated by the tortoise that he had to ask her.
what were the pills made uo of? were they the usual sleeping pills or the psycological pills of over-confidence and ego boost that causes even the intelligent people loose themselves? wonderful, enlightening write, sir.10 from me.thanks
thought put in a way that is only ur unique way of putting in lines...loved it!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
haha that was very funny: : 10+ for HUMOR