Sands Of Time! Poem by Eyan Desir

Sands Of Time!

Rating: 4.8


................................Seeds unfold
..............................as sand drifts
................................through the
..............................neck of glass
.............................stories are told
..............................souls are left
.................................to mourn
.................................while sour
...........................memories keep
..............................hearts cold
.............................beauties in life
................................grow with
................................each dropp
..........................each vessel holds
.........................its portioned sand
.............................nothing will
................................increase
............................the amount
...............................of sand
........................the grains that fall
...........................will not return
........................ into a hand
......................use sand wisely
........................your portion
...........................is running
...............................out.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 31 October 2009

Now you love to use the ancient egyptian hour glass as time constructing.....love you poem...well conceived!

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Ben Gieske 31 October 2009

Your message is delivered without any misunderstanding and well taken.

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Louis Rams 31 October 2009

the grains of sand like an hour glass, is something that in our lives we pass. unlike an hour glass where you can turn it upright, the time we lose is gone from sight. B - U - T- FUL POEM A TEN

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John Mcmanus 30 October 2009

Very nice Eyan, you build such a great atmosphere with so few words, the mark of a very fine poet,10.

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Adriel Gonzalez 29 October 2009

it's very very good the poemn i like it very much

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misminded angel 27 November 2009

ignore the double p my computer is acting rather weird lately

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misminded angel 27 November 2009

for a long time i have only read poems that are mine and ignored the messages when you feel that it is a good one please dropp it by :) thank you

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Nimal Dunuhinga 13 November 2009

It's another precious poem of time Eyan!

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Pitilosi Mdala 09 November 2009

the informer, well organized

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Scott Daniels 02 November 2009

Absolutely wonderfully expressed idea. Such innovative use of meter. Ten out of ten sir.

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