Scroll 3 Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Scroll 3

Rating: 5.0


blind princess plucked the black lute
her prayers were suspended in midair
blue boat made its way across the Persian gulf
through a floating blanket of drowned magnolias

I was a ghost in a shipwrecked soul
that overnight had become solemn
I was asking myself
which of us was meaner
you who had gone
or me who had left behind

a late summer was a purer adoration
hand in hand with a closest sweetheart
under plum tree a young poetess
recited a verse from a Book of Faith

(dedicated to a poet friend at poemhunter, Wassila Nader)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh T A 09 October 2009

Though brief the poem has immediately taken one to the climax! An impatient expression I believe!

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Obinna Eruchie 09 October 2009

'blind princess plucked the black lute / hes prayers were suspended in midair / blue boat made its way across the Persian gulf / through a floating blanket of drowned magnolias...' words of magic coming from you, Ahmad. May your pen continue to blossom.

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Christina Phan 09 October 2009

another gd on sir i luv it so much 10+++++

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Ruth Walters 09 October 2009

Another cracker....Ahmad Ruthie

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The Lost.. 09 October 2009

first of all i'd like to thank you very much....Umm i don't know what can i say but great poem coz you are the writer and thank you very much...

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 05 November 2009

an original Scroll/ well written poem Ahmad... 10+ Thanks For Sharing!

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Anthony Foster 21 October 2009

Maybe we are all ghosts in the persons of history but a shipwrecked soul such romance.

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Sonya Florentino 11 October 2009

i like the first verse....by itself.... as a whole poem.....just that verse alone stands by itself.....

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Louis Rams 11 October 2009

which one of us is meaner? i think it was the blind princess, great write.

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Noel Horlanda 11 October 2009

I love the starting point, 'the blind princess plucked the black lute', very imaginative...well done my friend.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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