Shabeeh Haider


Secret Whispers - Poem by Shabeeh Haider

When birds twitter to the trees,
And waves talk to briny seas.
When sky whispers to the sun,
Secrets that are shared by none.
When moon stares down at the land,
Moon beams whisper to the sand.
When my eyes shall stare at thine,
O whisper secrets into mine

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Secret Whispers by Shabeeh Haider

  • Chinedu Dike (7/10/2018 6:45:00 AM)

    A passionate love poem embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful creation from the heart. Thanks for sharing Shabeeh. (Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (12/23/2014 5:58:00 AM)

    What a beautiful poem! ....................10 (Report)Reply

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  • Sentamu Aziz (11/7/2014 4:03:00 AM)

    When sky whispers to the sun....a nice way to portray secrecy (Report)Reply

    Shabeeh Haider(11/7/2014 8:36:00 AM)

    Sentamu, thank you so much

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  • Heather Wilkins (11/2/2014 1:42:00 PM)

    when my eyes shall stare at thine o whisper secrets into mine a lovely write enjoyed (Report)Reply

    Shabeeh Haider(11/2/2014 9:43:00 PM)

    Thank you Heather

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  • Philo Yan (10/31/2014 4:07:00 AM)

    Secrets of Love that most desire to break the code. Well written. (Report)Reply

    Shabeeh Haider(11/1/2014 6:33:00 AM)

    Thank you Philo

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  • Gajanan Mishra (10/29/2014 12:08:00 AM)

    My eyes stare at.. wonderful. I like it. go on.. (Report)Reply

    Shabeeh Haider(10/29/2014 12:16:00 AM)

    Thank you Gajanan

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  • Amitava Sur (10/18/2014 9:23:00 PM)

    A lovely poem, enjoyed reading the same about endearing the secret of whispers what was consoling to the mind. (Report)Reply

    Shabeeh Haider(10/28/2014 7:24:00 AM)

    Thank you Amitava Sur

    Shabeeh Haider(10/28/2014 7:21:00 AM)

    Thank you Amitava Sur

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  • Ali Farah (10/18/2014 10:17:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem with much to relate. (Report)Reply

    Shabeeh Haider(10/28/2014 7:22:00 AM)

    Ali Farah, thank you

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  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (10/18/2014 2:11:00 AM)

    The game of eyes..the language of eyes...nice love poem (Report)Reply

    Shabeeh Haider(10/28/2014 7:23:00 AM)

    Thank you Aftab

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  • Hans Vr (10/16/2014 10:59:00 PM)

    This is superb.
    Very poetic, fluent rhymes and the content, the message, to me always the most important part of the poem, is sooooo good, sooooo nice. Very well done
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    Shabeeh Haider(10/17/2014 6:33:00 PM)

    Thank you most kindly

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  • Tajudeen Shah (10/16/2014 1:51:00 PM)

    simple comparisons, instant, inspiring, successful versification to establish the self realization of an often told truth of human life. the whisper, i feel like composing a bit longer version of it, that much your version of whisper cast a slant sweet shower of impulse-haze all over me. thank you very much for sharing. now, i whisper you to review my latest two poems in here, if time permits. thanx. rgds. (Report)Reply

    Shabeeh Haider(10/17/2014 6:33:00 PM)

    Thank you for your encouraging words

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 16, 2014



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