Secret Whispers Poem by Shabeeh Haider
Secret Whispers
When birds twitter to the trees,
And waves talk to briny seas.
When sky whispers to the sun,
Secrets that are shared by none.
When moon stares down at the land,
Moon beams whisper to the sand.
When my eyes shall stare at thine,
O whisper secrets into mine
A lovely poem, enjoyed reading the same about endearing the secret of whispers what was consoling to the mind.
simple comparisons, instant, inspiring, successful versification to establish the self realization of an often told truth of human life. the whisper, i feel like composing a bit longer version of it, that much your version of whisper cast a slant sweet shower of impulse-haze all over me. thank you very much for sharing. now, i whisper you to review my latest two poems in here, if time permits. thanx. rgds.
This is superb. Very poetic, fluent rhymes and the content, the message, to me always the most important part of the poem, is sooooo good, sooooo nice. Very well done
A passionate love poem embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful creation from the heart. Thanks for sharing Shabeeh.
When sky whispers to the sun....a nice way to portray secrecy
when my eyes shall stare at thine o whisper secrets into mine a lovely write enjoyed
Secrets of Love that most desire to break the code. Well written.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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10/10/2024 12:39:23 PM # 1.0.0
A beautiful poem with much to relate.