Secret Whispers Poem by Shabeeh Haider

Secret Whispers

Rating: 4.7

When birds twitter to the trees,
And waves talk to briny seas.
When sky whispers to the sun,
Secrets that are shared by none.
When moon stares down at the land,
Moon beams whisper to the sand.
When my eyes shall stare at thine,
O whisper secrets into mine

Thursday, October 16, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
Ali Farah 18 October 2014

A beautiful poem with much to relate.

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Amitava Sur 18 October 2014

A lovely poem, enjoyed reading the same about endearing the secret of whispers what was consoling to the mind.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 18 October 2014

The game of eyes..the language of eyes...nice love poem

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Hans Vr 16 October 2014

This is superb. Very poetic, fluent rhymes and the content, the message, to me always the most important part of the poem, is sooooo good, sooooo nice. Very well done

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Tajudeen Shah 16 October 2014

simple comparisons, instant, inspiring, successful versification to establish the self realization of an often told truth of human life. the whisper, i feel like composing a bit longer version of it, that much your version of whisper cast a slant sweet shower of impulse-haze all over me. thank you very much for sharing. now, i whisper you to review my latest two poems in here, if time permits. thanx. rgds.

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Chinedu Dike 10 July 2018

A passionate love poem embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful creation from the heart. Thanks for sharing Shabeeh.

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Akhtar Jawad 23 December 2014

What a beautiful poem! ....................10

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Sentamu Aziz 07 November 2014

When sky whispers to the sun....a nice way to portray secrecy

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Heather Wilkins 02 November 2014

when my eyes shall stare at thine o whisper secrets into mine a lovely write enjoyed

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Philo Yan 31 October 2014

Secrets of Love that most desire to break the code. Well written.

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