Self-proclaimed divine brutes
Tilak topi dadhi burqa
Embellishment to delude
The innocent faith of awam
Stop! And scrutinize
You god-damn god man
Does duplicity have a state
Before God?
© Aarzoo Mehek
Godmen and women happen in all colours and guises. Their only aim is to gain money and power, posing as demigods, exploiting the ignorant people. The agony and anguish at this is well -brought out in very little words. Very pertinent social issue.
Stop! And scrutinize You god- god man Does duplicity have a state Before God? Powerful expression! Top score! !
Right to the power infinity Mam.I have a poem 'self proclaimed Sadhus' of similar theme.Top marks.
Very powerful commentary on the current situation in our country given the politically charged orientation. I can understand the exasperation of poet being a peace-loving citizen. Thanks a lot.
Stop! And scrutinize You god- god man.....wonderful! A poem that needs thorough introspection.5 stars!
It's a world where Fake personalities are dominant submersing the real ones. A poem that floats truth
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I agree with you ma'am learn good things but be eise enough to distinguish bad and good. We are educated not literate so accept the good things and challenge the shackles. This is my understanding of religion.