Senryu # 05 Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Senryu # 05

Rating: 4.0


No venom in pen
Some words suffocate my brain!
Punished man or fame

-July 04,2018 Chattogram

Senryu # 05
Sunday, July 8, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: poisons,praise,writings
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
For me- Praising is a process to be paralyzed brain.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 08 July 2018

Though there is no venom in pen yet the words from it suffocate the brain. An impressive philosophical write is nicely shared.

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Akhtar Jawad 08 July 2018

A thought that cannot be denied.

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 August 2019

Chain and strain! ! ! ! ! Same with the frame. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Britte Ninad 14 August 2018

Yes- sometime some worthless praising befalls every good wisdom

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 July 2018

Another brilliant senryu. So very true. Very perceptive piece of work.10

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Geetha Jayakumar 11 July 2018

Thoughtful write. Your Senryu made me think what should I comment for this beautiful write. Pen had nothing to do with the words yet its the writings, the thoughts make a difference. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing!

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Kelly Kurt 08 July 2018

You are a thoughtful young man.

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