Senryu - 73 (Evasive Dreams) Poem by M. Asim Nehal

I recollect two lines from Nazish Pratabgarhi, Had darja bheanak hay tasveere jahan Nazish, Dekhe na agar insan kutch khab to mar jae. (Caricature of the world is horrifying-If one doesn't dream, he will die) It; s a beautiful poem by Asim......................10

yes, i do agree with you that dreams are evasive, well-composed poem, thanks for sharing.

I have often wonder why your senryu have the answer right great senryu my riend-10++

Dreams are so evasive and intrusive but reality of life is sprinkled with illusions too! Beautiful write!

Dreams are evasive is a fact. Only a few who could translate their dreams into reality by consistent toil are, thus, exception to the rule and hence, they prove it. Wonderful senryu. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

realism of life disturbs with illusions, hence dreams are evasive.

Outstanding...Life is illusion then dreams are evasive.

dreams are evasive. dreams save us. nice!

I agree with you fully.... Life is illusive and dreams evasive! Great senryu!

An insightful and powerful Senryu. Thank you, Mohammed