Kranthi Pothineni

Shadow - Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

In between my fingers moon got stuck
And stars were hidden behind my hand
My golden ring circled the golden sun
And my breath moved the thick clouds

Huge waterfalls went into my dry throat
And the tallest mounts came into my fist
One eye of mine is filled with deep blue
And the other one turned into green eye

World of mine now looks like a tiny grain
And its walls are lost under its own cover
This whole universe looks small before me
But this shadow of mine, is bigger than me

Comments about Shadow by Kranthi Pothineni

  • (4/17/2010 6:40:00 PM)

    Poem has dimensions--- (Report) Reply

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  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (4/16/2010 6:56:00 AM)

    i hope you understood the comment of Mr. Sheldon... 'NOSE BLEED' in the Philippines is the term used for 'AWE' or 'AWESOME'... your poem is great! (Report) Reply

  • (4/13/2010 7:45:00 AM)

    you know what

    all i can say is NOSE_BLEED

    i like the remnant of picture tells in the poem!

    the metaphoric lines are buzzing!
    the composure of figures are sosososososo good!

    i like it
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  • (4/12/2010 7:25:00 PM)

    Nice and interesting
    it's a also a good food for thought
    good job
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  • (4/12/2010 5:45:00 PM)

    excellent visual metaphor:
    ''My golden ring circled the golden sun''
    excellent meditative poem, very well expressed ideas to convey the message
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  • (4/12/2010 1:55:00 AM)

    This is a wonderful poem and i loved it very well written (Report) Reply

  • (4/11/2010 10:47:00 AM)

    Brillant as always! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! you are really good, and so are you poems :) (10) (Report) Reply

  • Rajaram Ramachandran (4/11/2010 2:35:00 AM)

    The big is seen small while the small is seen big. Your imagination runs very high in this poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 11, 2010

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