Shadow Poem by Kranthi Pothineni
Shadow
In between my fingers moon got stuck
And stars were hidden behind my hand
My golden ring circled the golden sun
And my breath moved the thick clouds
Huge waterfalls went into my dry throat
And the tallest mounts came into my fist
One eye of mine is filled with deep blue
And the other one turned into green eye
World of mine now looks like a tiny grain
And its walls are lost under its own cover
This whole universe looks small before me
But this shadow of mine, is bigger than me
Brillant as always! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! you are really good, and so are you poems :) (10)
i hope you understood the comment of Mr. Sheldon... 'NOSE BLEED' in the Philippines is the term used for 'AWE' or 'AWESOME'... your poem is great!
you know what all i can say is NOSE_BLEED i like the remnant of picture tells in the poem! the metaphoric lines are buzzing! the composure of figures are sosososososo good! i like it
Nice and interesting it's a also a good food for thought good job
excellent visual metaphor: ''My golden ring circled the golden sun'' excellent meditative poem, very well expressed ideas to convey the message 10/10/10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 10:08:52 AM # 1.0.0.1119
The big is seen small while the small is seen big. Your imagination runs very high in this poem.