Sheep On A Green Field Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Sheep On A Green Field

Rating: 5.0


could not fall asleep
started counting sheep
did that from the deep sleep I encountered
all of a sudden, I sat up right at bed
counting sheep? !
why?
I never had one sleepless night
right? I said to the self
only because I have read about a sleepless night?
Come on, world wide
you are known
easy fall asleep
and so deep

I've never started counting sheep again
I've never encountered the sleepless night then

© Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved

This is a translation of the poem Schapen In Een Groen Veld by Sylvia Frances Chan
Tuesday, June 15, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: night,deep,sleep
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Just imagine and enjoy the poem and you will have no sleepless night! Right? Good Night Sleep Well
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 15 June 2021

Just imagine and enjoy the poem and you will have no sleepless night! Right? Good Night Sleep Well

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Indira Renganathan 15 June 2021

An amusing poem for a sleepless night...enjoyed....5*****

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 June 2021

Sometimes sleep is so elusive and we will find our mind wandering from one tbought to another.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 June 2021

A marvelous poem well crafted

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 June 2021

Liked the rythmn and images that embellished this lively and lovely write. Top Marks! ! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 December 2021

Sleep well dear poetess! An excellent poem....5 stars

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Nabakishore Dash 14 December 2021

A good remedy to have deep sleep in ones life.

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KAVIN CHARALAN 16 June 2021

sleep and sheep ---good

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 June 2021

Deep sleep fives us nice and amazing perception. Sheep has mesmerized mind. Sleepless night has brought up new dreams of many stars. A brilliant and thought full poem is well penned.

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M Asim Nehal 16 June 2021

Yes I heard about counting the stars but sheep, really interesting. We all have our own ways of doing things, I liked it.5****

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Sylvia Frances Chan

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